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Ifyouwanttomakeavaluejudgmentaboutdaffodils，chooseanadjective1ike“garish.”Ifyou”treina_partofthe_countrywherethedirtisred，feelfreetomentionthereddirt.，Thoseadjectiveswoulddoajobthatthenounalonewouldn”tbedoing.MostwritersSowadjectivesalmostunconsciouslyintotheSoliloftheirprfrosetomakeitmorelushandpretty，andtheSentencesbecomelongerandlongerastheyfillupwithstatelyelmsandfriskykittensandhard-bittendetectivesandSleepylagoons，Thisisadjective-by-habit一ahabityouShouldgetTridof.，Noteveryoakhastobegnarled.，TheadjectivethatexistsSolelyasdecorationisaself-indulgenceforthewriterandaburdenforthefreader.Again，theTtfruleisSimple:makeyouradjectivesdoWorkthatneedstobedone.，“HelookedatthegraySkyandtheblackcloudsanddecidedtosailbacktotheharbor.”ThedarknessoftheSkyandthecloudsisthereasonforthedecision.，Ifit”simportanttotellthereaderthatahouseWasdraboragirlwasbeautiful，byallmeansuse“drab”and“beautiful.”TheywillhavetheirproperpowerbecauseyouhavelearnedtouseadjectivesSparsely.LTTTLEQuALIFIERS。PruneouttheSmallwordsthatqual

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ifyhowyoufeelandhowyouthinkandwhatyouSaw:“abit,”“a1little,”“sortof,”“kindof”“Tather,”“quite,”“Very,，?”“too,”“prettymuch,”“inasense”anddozensmore.Theydiluteyourstyleandyourpersuasiveness.Don”tSayyouWereabitconfusedandsortoftiredanda1]ittledepressedandSomewhatannoyed.，Beconfused，Betired.Bedepressed，Beannoyed，Don”thedgeyourproseWith1ittletimidities，Goodwritingisleanandconfident.Don”tSayyouWeren”ttoohappybecausethehotelwasprettyexpensive，Sayyouweren”fthappybecausethehotelWasexpensive，Don”ttellusyouwereduitefortunate.Howfortunateisthat9?2Don”TtdescribeaneventasTtratherspectacularofrvefyawesome，Words1ike“spectacular”and“awesome”don”tsubmitto_measurement.“Very”jsaUsefulwordto_achieveemphasis，butfarmoreoften计tt”Sclutter.，There”snoneedto_callsomeoneverymethodical.Eitherheismethodicalorheisn”tt.Thelargepointisoneofauthority.Every1ittlequalifierwhittlesawaySomefractionofthefreader”Sstrust.ReaderswantaWriterwhobelievesinhimselfandinwhatheisSaying，Don”tdiminishthatbelief.Don”tbekindofbol1d，Bebold.PuNcTUATION。

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